The introductory part should try to give clear and precise informative ideas which are related to the topic of discussion. This will enable the person reading to have a clear perspective of what the paper is all about hence enabling him to understand more clearly. In regard to this, the introductory part should avoid too much information which might not be relevant and this will reduce the chances of coming up with a paper that might eventually cause boredom to the reader.
There should be clarity regarding the statement of the problem given in the paper. This means that information given about the topic should include a bit of some history concerning the ailment as the subject of discussion. This can be done through researching for the key ideas that reflect on the ailment. These may include issues such as: what is the cause of the ailment, how it is contracted et cetera. The information can also include how the tests conducted have been of importance in the determination of the ailment through the existence of evidence of the past being present. The causatives that result in the existence of the disease should be addressed as this is important in helping a reader get prior consequences in relation to acquiring the ailment. This should also include ways in which one can free him/herself from the risk of contracting the ailment.
The hypothesis is required to be clearer than stated in the paper, in this sense; the hypothesis should focus on questions that try to explain how obese people can improve their health by the use of the milk thistle process. This should be done across a wide demographic area and each of the explanations put in place is accompanied by citations to give the explanation a strong basis.
The threats to validity mentioned are just some of the chosen ones. This means that if more research is conducted, more threats are likely to be exposed thus making it possible to find the best possible ways to cure the ailment. This means that the threats may cause effects to research as every threat has its specialized formula of approach hence the need to thoroughly research the ailment and its diagnostics.
The data collection measurements are appropriate but for easier understanding, this should be depicted in a chart diagram so as to help a reader understand more vividly. We should try to find a way in which the measurements suggested, are collected, analyzed for the ability to find diagnosis regarding the ailment.
In respect to the literature review, it is considered that due to the challenges posed, there is a need to have the number of direct quotes reduced and for this, there should be the proper interpretation of the literature which in turn follows a citation that involves the author. This might be of help in achieving the flow of the paper thus helping in the communication of your understanding of the literature. I also consider this process as tiresome as it is quite challenging but indeed it might be of much help in our quest to find an aim. To have this process complete, there must be the inclusion of a section for the methods you will use to collect and analyze data. The final draft you prepare should have a timetable reflecting a schedule for your study.
This will have significance on the research as different aspects and expectations will be met through rigorous research. Information will enable the probability of the ailing to find a cure hence start living responsibly through taking healthy foods that do not affect the body. With this in place, the issues of concern will act as important information whose consideration is worth it.