The introduction in the essay “Differences in parenting styles in the East (China) and the West (America)” is short and straightforward. The thesis is clearly stated, the author managed to indicate the main point of the story. The language used by the author is simple and easy to understand for readers of all levels. The fact that the author provided information about differences in parenting styles of China and America is commendable because it demonstrates the awareness about the subject.
Moreover, it should be noted that the author used several quotations in the essay, which is good since it means that the author has read the book thoroughly in order to support their arguments. The tone of the essay is consistent and matches the subject matter well. All in all, the author has applied effort in explaining to the reader how many hardships the main character had to endure during childhood. However, the essay lacks a definite conclusion; perhaps the author should focus on restating the thesis of the essay instead of summarizing the ending of the story.
Regarding the essay “The Abandonment of Family and Adoption of African Heritage,” the author has started paper well by giving a summary of the story, as well as by providing background information about the period and the climate of the story. The thesis statement is on the right track: it allows the reader to get the general idea of the story and follow the author’s directions.
The author makes a good point on how those who embrace their culture also objectivize their heritage. Moreover, this argument is supported by examples taken from the story. Furthermore, the essay manages to show the other side of the story that is represented by characters who continue to use practical objects of their culture, thus, embracing them in their way. The conclusion draws the essay to a close by speaking about how two main sides juxtapose one another and highlight the rift in culture during the 1960s. It is clear and corresponds with the thesis quite well.